Thursday, October 11, 2012

बुरी आदत (हाइकु)

हर रोज़ रूठना, मनाना, झगड़े, शिकायतें 
फिर भी दूर-दूर नहीं रह सकते 
एक-दूसरे की बुरी आदत हैं हम...

3 comments:

  1. the last word should be' hamein' no? so that it rhymes with the last words of other lines.

    how have you been mr gulfam.....

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  2. The background is very gloomy !
    anonyMous

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  3. my email has been hacked....i cannot access it any longer....sad

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